You’ve included lots of interesting facts here and organised your work well but you need to have a look at your use of verbs as you’ve made some errors. Go back and try to correct these. Do you think you could also try and include more pictures to draw in your reader and give them some more information about chimpanzees?
Hi Andrei,
You’ve included lots of interesting facts here and organised your work well but you need to have a look at your use of verbs as you’ve made some errors. Go back and try to correct these. Do you think you could also try and include more pictures to draw in your reader and give them some more information about chimpanzees?
Keep up the good work.
Mrs Moore