Hi Rayyan,
This was certainly an emotive response to the prompt this week; you made great use of the author’s voice to draw me in and feel sympathy for your main character. I suggest you think about the layout, you’re starting a new line in random places that makes this confusing to read, this is an easy fix.
Hi Rayyan,
This was certainly an emotive response to the prompt this week; you made great use of the author’s voice to draw me in and feel sympathy for your main character. I suggest you think about the layout, you’re starting a new line in random places that makes this confusing to read, this is an easy fix.
Well done
Mrs Moore