I absolutely loved reading this and can see you’ve definitely been influenced by current events! You made excellent use of varied sentence lengths and great use of the authors voice to draw me in.
Hi Furqan,
This was a great read that really made me chuckle. You’ve clearly been inspired by current events to write a short story with humour and maturity. Well done.
Hope you’re doing ok.
Max Bradley Team 100
Manchester
Hi Furqaan,
I absolutely loved reading this and can see you’ve definitely been influenced by current events! You made excellent use of varied sentence lengths and great use of the authors voice to draw me in.
Well done.
Mrs Moore
Hi Furqan,
This was a great read that really made me chuckle. You’ve clearly been inspired by current events to write a short story with humour and maturity. Well done.
Hope you’re doing ok.
Max Bradley Team 100
Manchester