You’ve done a good job of including all the words from the prompt into your writing. You use the narrator’s voice well to tell your story and leave me asking questions.
Think about how to use pronouns to avoid repetition.
Mrs Moore
I’m fascinated about who this girl could be, why this book is so important and want to know more. Thank you for sharing your writing with us this week.
Keep on writing.
Mrs Hutchinson
Team 100 New Zealand
Hi Spandana,
You’ve done a good job of including all the words from the prompt into your writing. You use the narrator’s voice well to tell your story and leave me asking questions.
Think about how to use pronouns to avoid repetition.
Mrs Moore
Hello Spandana,
Hope you guys are doing ok in the UK.
I’m fascinated about who this girl could be, why this book is so important and want to know more. Thank you for sharing your writing with us this week.
Keep on writing.
Mrs Hutchinson
Team 100 New Zealand