Hi Anojan,
You’ve used really interesting detail to create an aura of mystery to your entry this week but I can see some punctuation errors.
Mrs Moore
Hey Anojan,
Well you’ve left me wanting to know so much more; why have you been left the book? Where have all your diamonds gone? And what happens next? This is the sign of a talented writer.
Keep on writing. Mrs Hutchinson Team 100 New Zealand
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Hi Anojan,
You’ve used really interesting detail to create an aura of mystery to your entry this week but I can see some punctuation errors.
Mrs Moore
Hey Anojan,
Well you’ve left me wanting to know so much more; why have you been left the book? Where have all your diamonds gone? And what happens next? This is the sign of a talented writer.
Keep on writing.
Mrs Hutchinson
Team 100 New Zealand