Hi Shayaan,
This is an exciting and tense response to the prompt this week. You’ve used varied sentence lengths well to create effects. There are some basic errors I think you might want to correct before I enter you for the competition this week.
Keep it up. Mrs Moore
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Hi Shayaan,
This is an exciting and tense response to the prompt this week. You’ve used varied sentence lengths well to create effects. There are some basic errors I think you might want to correct before I enter you for the competition this week.
Keep it up.
Mrs Moore