Layla what a wonderful piece of writing, you really created an effective mood for your reader through your controlled punctuation and your descriptive language. Next time make sure the mood of the font you are typing in matches the mood of your writing!
What a fabulous piece of writing Layla. I like how you have created a poem. I also like the use the question that you ask half way through, it really makes the reader think!
Keep up the good work!
Miss Heappey (Team 100WC)
Layla what a wonderful piece of writing, you really created an effective mood for your reader through your controlled punctuation and your descriptive language. Next time make sure the mood of the font you are typing in matches the mood of your writing!
What a fabulous piece of writing Layla. I like how you have created a poem. I also like the use the question that you ask half way through, it really makes the reader think!
Keep up the good work!
Miss Heappey (Team 100WC)