Great stuff Sachien, I love the way you rambled through the passageways like a rat in a maze; some really great descriptive language to paint a picture in my mind. Remember to make each word count; I think you could have given me less detail to begin with and more later on.
Great stuff Sachien, I love the way you rambled through the passageways like a rat in a maze; some really great descriptive language to paint a picture in my mind. Remember to make each word count; I think you could have given me less detail to begin with and more later on.