wow gharish I really like your words and how you said the sunny seaside and the rusty ship!!
also remember remember to use your punctuation skills!
also remember remember to use your punctuation skills! imaan !!!!!!!!!!!!!! well done keep writing on the 100wc!!!!!!!!!!
Brilliant Gharish, I love how you used your opening to hook me in by letting me know that your story was going to be an adventure, and I was certainly not left disappointed! Remember to check for commas when you want your reader to pause.
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wow gharish I really like your words and how you said the sunny seaside and the rusty ship!!
also remember remember to use your punctuation skills!
wow gharish I really like your words and how you said the sunny seaside and the rusty ship!!
also remember remember to use your punctuation skills!
imaan !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
well done keep writing on the 100wc!!!!!!!!!!
Brilliant Gharish, I love how you used your opening to hook me in by letting me know that your story was going to be an adventure, and I was certainly not left disappointed! Remember to check for commas when you want your reader to pause.