Great stuff Serena, I love how you used a question to draw me into your writing and then a question at the end to leave me thinking. Well done. Next time try to use synonyms to avoid repetition.
Ooo, if I was a fisherman who was scared of the rocking motion in boats, I think I’d be looking for a change in career Serena. Perhaps if he’d done that he might have survived. Do you think you could go to sea to catch fish for a job? Must be tough in storms and rough seas … which must be why the three men who salvaged the rusty fishing boat were having second thoughts?
Well done and keep rising to the Challenge.
Well done Serena on how you have created suspense at the end of your story. I wonder what would have been the next chapter in your story. Keep up the good writing.
Great stuff Serena, I love how you used a question to draw me into your writing and then a question at the end to leave me thinking. Well done. Next time try to use synonyms to avoid repetition.
Ooo, if I was a fisherman who was scared of the rocking motion in boats, I think I’d be looking for a change in career Serena. Perhaps if he’d done that he might have survived. Do you think you could go to sea to catch fish for a job? Must be tough in storms and rough seas … which must be why the three men who salvaged the rusty fishing boat were having second thoughts?
Well done and keep rising to the Challenge.
Well done Serena on how you have created suspense at the end of your story. I wonder what would have been the next chapter in your story. Keep up the good writing.