the sea serpent

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4 Responses to the sea serpent

  1. nanand says:

    Fabulous Alex! I really love the detail in your description of the lurking sea serpent, I really understand just how dangerous the creature is. I wonder when this evil creature will strike again? I want to know more.

  2. habej says:

    I like the similes you put in there to compare to really good things, when you started your story when went passed it i couldn’t wait to read your amazing story
    well done Alex keep up the great work!:)
    by janna , your best freind

  3. habej says:

    when you put STRIKE in capital letters it nearly scared me as much as a nightmare

  4. colea says:

    thanks janna

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