Fabulous Alex! I really love the detail in your description of the lurking sea serpent, I really understand just how dangerous the creature is. I wonder when this evil creature will strike again? I want to know more.
I like the similes you put in there to compare to really good things, when you started your story when went passed it i couldn’t wait to read your amazing story
well done Alex keep up the great work!:)
by janna , your best freind
Fabulous Alex! I really love the detail in your description of the lurking sea serpent, I really understand just how dangerous the creature is. I wonder when this evil creature will strike again? I want to know more.
I like the similes you put in there to compare to really good things, when you started your story when went passed it i couldn’t wait to read your amazing story
well done Alex keep up the great work!:)
by janna , your best freind
when you put STRIKE in capital letters it nearly scared me as much as a nightmare
thanks janna