Oh my goodness, what a terrifying end to your story Aadeeb! I love how you drew me in straightaway by signposting that something terrible was going to happen and then you increased the tension through your precise use of descriptive language. Well done.
wow Aadeeb i’ve never heard anything scary as that Aadeeb a tingle
made me shiver like i was running a marathon,this story is fabulous.
I Wonder what will happen next?:)
Oh my goodness, what a terrifying end to your story Aadeeb! I love how you drew me in straightaway by signposting that something terrible was going to happen and then you increased the tension through your precise use of descriptive language. Well done.
I like how how you built up the tension till the ending were you wrote One had a sword and it stabbed me……..
WELL DONE!!!!!
wow Aadeeb i’ve never heard anything scary as that Aadeeb a tingle
made me shiver like i was running a marathon,this story is fabulous.
I Wonder what will happen next?:)
by your best friend, janna