The portal Gun

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3 Responses to The portal Gun

  1. nanand says:

    Hi Rayyan,

    I hope you and your family are doing ok during this lockdown.

    Well this was an excellent piece of writing; your best yet for the challenge. Your clever use of a 1 word sentence had me hooked from the start and you made great use of the narrator’s voice to make me care about what was happening and wanting to know more. Remember your apostrophe to show possession. You really are a talented writer.

    Keep up the great work and stay safe
    Mrs Moore

  2. Mustafa says:

    Wow very good Rayyan

    Keep up the good work

  3. Nadia says:

    Well done Rayyan, I am so pleased to see your efforts. The way you established the story from the beginning to the end it kept me engaged and I wanted to know more. It’s a real pleasure seeing you flourish in your learning. Good job !

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