The accident by Pasupathi Sivaruban

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1 Response to The accident by Pasupathi Sivaruban

  1. nanand says:

    Hi Pasupathi,

    Well it certainly sounds like you and your brother have got yourselves into a bit of a pickle! I loved the way you used natural expressions in your narrator’s voice to draw me into your story. You use ‘so’ a lot, can you think of a synonym?

    Keep up the great writing and stay safe
    Mrs M

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