Hi Pasupathi,
Well it certainly sounds like you and your brother have got yourselves into a bit of a pickle! I loved the way you used natural expressions in your narrator’s voice to draw me into your story. You use ‘so’ a lot, can you think of a synonym?
Keep up the great writing and stay safe Mrs M
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Hi Pasupathi,
Well it certainly sounds like you and your brother have got yourselves into a bit of a pickle! I loved the way you used natural expressions in your narrator’s voice to draw me into your story. You use ‘so’ a lot, can you think of a synonym?
Keep up the great writing and stay safe
Mrs M