Oh my goodness, I wonder what happened to Jasmine! What a great way to build the tension in your story Lakshithaa. Well done. Next time remember to check your punctuation.
wow lakshitha i really loved your story and how you had said a vice came to Jasmines ears and not just write she heard well done keep up the amazing work!!
remember your tenses because you said
but not one part of jasmine body move !!
well done
imaan!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Oh my goodness, I wonder what happened to Jasmine! What a great way to build the tension in your story Lakshithaa. Well done. Next time remember to check your punctuation.
wow lakshitha i really loved your story and how you had said a vice came to Jasmines ears and not just write she heard well done keep up the amazing work!!
remember your tenses because you said
but not one part of jasmine body move !!
well done
imaan!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!