Oh wow Prithikaa! What wonderful imagery, I really felt like character, full of emotion and hope. Greate use of an ellipsis at the end to leave me thinking. I want to know more. Well done.
Hi Prithikaa
That is such a good story… a story full of drama, sorrow and finally a glimmer of hope!
Your imagination has “turned” a rusty wreck into a real human interest story…you have given life to an inanimate object.
It is so well described that I felt I was there shouting for help.
…and you have left the reader wanting to know more!
Very well done. More please!
Greg T
Oh wow Prithikaa! What wonderful imagery, I really felt like character, full of emotion and hope. Greate use of an ellipsis at the end to leave me thinking. I want to know more. Well done.
Hi Prithikaa
That is such a good story… a story full of drama, sorrow and finally a glimmer of hope!
Your imagination has “turned” a rusty wreck into a real human interest story…you have given life to an inanimate object.
It is so well described that I felt I was there shouting for help.
…and you have left the reader wanting to know more!
Very well done. More please!
Greg T