Wow! What a great twist to your intriguing story Somran. What made the boat turn up? Would the hero be found? Next time make time to check your spelling.
Hello Somran What a great and creative start to the story I loved it!
From your mummy
AMAZING! I love how you hooked your reader with adjectives! Next time use punctuation!
MYSTERY MAN! from your wierd 5B classmate….
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Wow! What a great twist to your intriguing story Somran. What made the boat turn up? Would the hero be found?
Next time make time to check your spelling.
Hello Somran
What a great and creative start to the story I loved it!
From your mummy
AMAZING! I love how you hooked your reader with adjectives! Next time use punctuation!
MYSTERY MAN!
from your wierd 5B classmate….