What I regret

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3 Responses to What I regret

  1. nanand says:

    Hi Rayyan,

    Another great job this week. I love the way you used the prompt to tell the tale of regret; we’ve all been there and said the wrong thing in the past. Next time make sure all your similes fit the context.

    Keep up the great work.
    Mrs M

  2. Nadia says:

    Good work Rayyan, keep it up x

  3. Mrs P (Team 100WC) says:

    Hi Rayyan
    This is an interesting 100WC using the idea of regret. I enjoyed the way you used the prompt in it, and then built on the idea by having it become a catch phrase. That is exactly how things happen in real life. Well done.
    Mrs P (Team 100WC)
    Wellington, New Zealand

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