Hi Andrei,
Well done for entering the challenge this week; I can see you really focussed on your use of punctuation and used dialogue well. Next time think about how you can include elements to make your reader feel excited. Keep up the great work. Mrs Moore
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Hi Andrei,
Well done for entering the challenge this week; I can see you really focussed on your use of punctuation and used dialogue well. Next time think about how you can include elements to make your reader feel excited.
Keep up the great work.
Mrs Moore