Brilliant Hamzah, I was hooked from the start by your use of repetition and powerful emotive imagery. It must have been quite an awful experience for Captain Sissoka. Now I want to know much more about him, I wonder what happens next?
wwwooowww!!! that is amazing work! I love the way the begining was planed check some of your punchuation
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Brilliant Hamzah, I was hooked from the start by your use of repetition and powerful emotive imagery. It must have been quite an awful experience for Captain Sissoka. Now I want to know much more about him, I wonder what happens next?
wwwooowww!!!
that is amazing work!
I love the way the begining was planed
check some of your punchuation