Thank you for completing the 100 Word Challenge this week. It certainly sounds like your main character has had a bit of a tough time; it’s not easy being new somewhere. Maybe your Mark should ask for help, I’m sure lots of people would want to help him. Well done for having a clear writer’s voice to draw me into your writing. Next time remember to check you’ve used enough commas.
I’m looking forward to reading your next work.
Mrs Moore
Hi Hidit,
Thank you for completing the 100 Word Challenge this week. It certainly sounds like your main character has had a bit of a tough time; it’s not easy being new somewhere. Maybe your Mark should ask for help, I’m sure lots of people would want to help him. Well done for having a clear writer’s voice to draw me into your writing. Next time remember to check you’ve used enough commas.
I’m looking forward to reading your next work.
Mrs Moore