Hi Brindan,
Thanks for entering the challenge this week. Your story reminded me a little of the film ‘Home Alone’ ; I’m glad those naughty bandits got caught and sent to jail ; I especially loved your use of interesting vocabulary that added to your atmosphere.
Keep up the great work.
Mrs M
Hi Brindan,
Thanks for entering the challenge this week. Your story reminded me a little of the film ‘Home Alone’ ; I’m glad those naughty bandits got caught and sent to jail ; I especially loved your use of interesting vocabulary that added to your atmosphere.
Keep up the great work.
Mrs M