Hi Spandana,
This was a delight to read; you used some wonderful descriptive language to create an atmosphere which drew me in. Next time try not to repeat words; can you think of an alternative to ‘sun’. I wonder what will happen on your adventure.
Keep up the great writing.
Mrs M
Hi Spandana,
This was a delight to read; you used some wonderful descriptive language to create an atmosphere which drew me in. Next time try not to repeat words; can you think of an alternative to ‘sun’. I wonder what will happen on your adventure.
Keep up the great writing.
Mrs M