What a fabulous mystery Imaan, I really love the way your story starts of normal and then the mood changes and things get creepier and creepier. Next time remember to check your spelling.
I thoroughly enjoyed the suspense towards the end of the story! Every sentence has a great amount of description and your wonderful use of vocabulary makes the story seem like much more than 100 words. Well done!
wow! that really scared the life out of me imaan!
I like how you used different fonts to make it look awesome!
and also i like how you used words and made it even better like big or giant, into humongous!
What a fabulous mystery Imaan, I really love the way your story starts of normal and then the mood changes and things get creepier and creepier. Next time remember to check your spelling.
ok thanks miss
i really hope that you liked my story
Good detailed work
Super interesting really want to know what happens next.
Well Done 🙂
Thank you
I thoroughly enjoyed the suspense towards the end of the story! Every sentence has a great amount of description and your wonderful use of vocabulary makes the story seem like much more than 100 words. Well done!
This is a winning story!
thanks amber for your lovely comment and thanks for saying its a winning story i do hope i get
nominated!!!
thanks amber for your lovely comment and thanks for saying its a winning story i do hope i get
nominated!!!
:):):):);)
wow! that really scared the life out of me imaan!
I like how you used different fonts to make it look awesome!
and also i like how you used words and made it even better like big or giant, into humongous!
thanks janna i love your comment on my work i also think your work was pretty cool to!!!!!!!!!!!
thanks janna i love your comment on my work i also think your work was pretty cool to!!!!!!!!!!!
:););)