Hi Yukta,
You did a great job of understanding the articles and finding the evidence but you need to work at explaining the evidence. Sometimes using information from other parts of the text could help you with that; for example you could have explained why he chose that particular distance in the first question. You also need to work at explaining your reasoning so that you are more clear in your nomination
Keep up the great work and let me know if you want me to send you an electronic copy of the newspaper.
Mrs M
Hi Yukta,
You did a great job of understanding the articles and finding the evidence but you need to work at explaining the evidence. Sometimes using information from other parts of the text could help you with that; for example you could have explained why he chose that particular distance in the first question. You also need to work at explaining your reasoning so that you are more clear in your nomination
Keep up the great work and let me know if you want me to send you an electronic copy of the newspaper.
Mrs M