Thank you for publishing your writing onto our blog. You used some fantastic descriptive vocabulary to help me get a picture in my mind. Remember if you use the indefinite article ( a or an) it needs to be followed by a noun ( calm not calmness). I really want to know what happens next; this is something talented writers do.
Dear Mrs Moore,
Thank you for using your valuable time reading my 100 wc. I will remember to use all this feedback when I’m doing it next time. Thank you and best of luck.
Hello Hidit, what a lovely descriptive story you have written. Your description of the moon (jasmine) was wonderful, I thought. I also liked how you gave me a clue that the story was going to change by using words like: eerie and spooky. The simile you used worked well too. Well done.
Thank you very much for the descriptive Feedback on my writing. I am very happy to have a reader from Australia, plus I would want to visit Australia someday.
Thank you Hidit! I agree with the other comments. You use such vivid description. Your story is one in which you can listen to with your eyes shut and feel transported in to the story. Losing myself in a good story is one of my favorite things! Thank you for taking me on a quick journey!
Sincerly, McBreezy Team 100, Los Angeles, California
I am a big fan of the Looney tunes and Hollywood movies. I am positively love your wonderful writing.
Hi Hidit, great reading your story and very nice use of vocabulary. Liked the wide ranged grammar usage which makes the story complete in all ways. Keep on writing more and hope to see you as a nice upcoming writer 🙂
Dear Mr anoop,
Thanks for your helpful feedback and for the time.
Hi Hidit, almost felt like i was suddenly living the fear. Good use of words and excellent narration. Just keep writing.
Dear Bapi Dada,
This part of your feedback made me smile, ” Almost felt like i was suddenly living the fear,”. Thank you for saying, “Good use of words and excellent narration.”.
Thank you for letting me go through your treasure of thoughts. I always like to read such a story where it increases my anxiety to read more. I am curious to know what happens next.
Good job +1, just keep writing.
Thank you for letting me go through your treasure of thoughts.I really find the feedback is nice.
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