Hi Robert, You were right not to trust the stranger; I do hope you’re all ok. I really like the way you retold events; next time consider how using adverbs you could influence your reader’s opinion. Keep up the great writing. Mrs M
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Hi Robert,
You were right not to trust the stranger; I do hope you’re all ok. I really like the way you retold events; next time consider how using adverbs you could influence your reader’s opinion.
Keep up the great writing.
Mrs M