Oliver, I am slightly confused, did you or you didn’t see that thing that distracted you on your way to the park?
Good to see your punctuation improving!
Keep up the good work
I think we will all be very happy when we are free to go out and see our friends. I hope you’re doing well and keeping well. Hopefully it won’t be too much longer.
I can see you’ve been influenced by current events and as your mum said have worked to improve your punctuation. Next time include enough detail so your reader understands what’s going on.
Mrs M
Oliver, I am slightly confused, did you or you didn’t see that thing that distracted you on your way to the park?
Good to see your punctuation improving!
Keep up the good work
Hi Oliver,
I think we will all be very happy when we are free to go out and see our friends. I hope you’re doing well and keeping well. Hopefully it won’t be too much longer.
I can see you’ve been influenced by current events and as your mum said have worked to improve your punctuation. Next time include enough detail so your reader understands what’s going on.
Mrs M