Oh wow Surabhi! Some excellent use of questions and unanswered information to hook me into your writing, with wonderful descriptive phrasing to create an even stronger and intriguing atmosphere for your reader. Well done. Next time remember to check that all of your words fit the context.
Oh wow Surabhi! Some excellent use of questions and unanswered information to hook me into your writing, with wonderful descriptive phrasing to create an even stronger and intriguing atmosphere for your reader. Well done. Next time remember to check that all of your words fit the context.
Really enjoyed reading your story – really makes you think!!
Excellent describing words. Really felt your emotions
Mrs Barker