This certainly sounds like a scary night, somehow being alone always makes things a little more scary. Please go back and edit your work to make sure you have the exact prompt in your story. You might also want to check that all your verbs are in the past.
Kia ora Andrei. Well done, I really enjoyed your 100 Word Challenge. You have captured the feelings of this frightening experience really well in your writing. Keep up the great work Andrei!
Hi Andrei,
This certainly sounds like a scary night, somehow being alone always makes things a little more scary. Please go back and edit your work to make sure you have the exact prompt in your story. You might also want to check that all your verbs are in the past.
Mrs Moore
Kia ora Andrei. Well done, I really enjoyed your 100 Word Challenge. You have captured the feelings of this frightening experience really well in your writing. Keep up the great work Andrei!