What a spooky response to the prompt! I love the way you used the first person to draw me into your narrative but you sometimes moved from ‘I’ to ‘she’ which confused me a bit. I really want to know what happens next; what came behind you? Did you get away? Who or what was screaming?
Hi Shayaan,
What a spooky response to the prompt! I love the way you used the first person to draw me into your narrative but you sometimes moved from ‘I’ to ‘she’ which confused me a bit. I really want to know what happens next; what came behind you? Did you get away? Who or what was screaming?
Keep up the great writing and stay safe.
Mrs M