Hi Rayyan,
What a horrific camping trip! I loved the way you created empathy in your reader and built the tension through your use of descriptive language and varied sentence lengths and then you hit me with your last sentence! What a twist! Well done.
Mrs M
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Hi Rayyan,
What a horrific camping trip! I loved the way you created empathy in your reader and built the tension through your use of descriptive language and varied sentence lengths and then you hit me with your last sentence! What a twist!
Well done.
Mrs M