the deafening scream

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1 Response to the deafening scream

  1. nanand says:

    Hi Shayaan,

    What a spooky response to the prompt! I love the way you used the first person to draw me into your narrative but you sometimes moved from ‘I’ to ‘she’ which confused me a bit. I really want to know what happens next; what came behind you? Did you get away? Who or what was screaming?

    Keep up the great writing and stay safe.

    Mrs M

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