The haunted house by Yukta Sree Saravana Kumar

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2 Responses to The haunted house by Yukta Sree Saravana Kumar

  1. nanand says:

    Hi Yukta,

    Some excellent description in your writing created an engaging atmosphere for your reader. Think about whether the ellipsis works here, could you finish you simile?

    Keep it up.

    Mrs M

  2. Mrs Richards says:

    Well done Yukta – you really painted some great pictures with your words. I particularly liked the section about the goose bumps – it reminded me of how I feel when I’m a little bit scared. You did a great deal with very few words – I do think I would have liked to know what the last sentence would say. Thanks for sharing.

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