The Game By Pasupathi Sivaruban

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1 Response to The Game By Pasupathi Sivaruban

  1. nanand says:

    Hi Pasupathi,

    Well done for editing your piece and now including the prompt. This doesn’t sound like a very nice game, I’m not sure I would play it. You did a great job of creating a sinister atmosphere with your careful word choices. Moving on I would think about organising your work into clear paragraphs.

    Mrs Moore

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