Some excellent description in your writing created an engaging atmosphere for your reader. Think about whether the ellipsis works here, could you finish you simile?
Well done Yukta – you really painted some great pictures with your words. I particularly liked the section about the goose bumps – it reminded me of how I feel when I’m a little bit scared. You did a great deal with very few words – I do think I would have liked to know what the last sentence would say. Thanks for sharing.
Hi Yukta,
Some excellent description in your writing created an engaging atmosphere for your reader. Think about whether the ellipsis works here, could you finish you simile?
Keep it up.
Mrs M
Well done Yukta – you really painted some great pictures with your words. I particularly liked the section about the goose bumps – it reminded me of how I feel when I’m a little bit scared. You did a great deal with very few words – I do think I would have liked to know what the last sentence would say. Thanks for sharing.