Hi Anojan,
I’m so glad your dog is ok, I had been having dreadful thoughts that the crocodile had taken him. You made great use of descriptive vocabulary. My only advice would be try to use synonyms to avoid repetition- can you tink of an alternative to ‘canal’?
Hi Anojan,
I’m so glad your dog is ok, I had been having dreadful thoughts that the crocodile had taken him. You made great use of descriptive vocabulary. My only advice would be try to use synonyms to avoid repetition- can you tink of an alternative to ‘canal’?
Keep up the great work.
Mrs M