Wow Hidit this is an amazing 100WC. I love how you wrote this as though it was in the middle of a story. It added a real sense of drama. You built the suspense of the situation with your writing. I especially loved the ending. You used very descriptive words to describe the trees and what they would do to you and Olivia. All round, this is an excellent piece of writing.
Mrs P (Team 100WC)
Wellington, New Zealand
Another wonderful response to the prompt this week. You have made really great use of language to draw me in and paint a picture in my mind’s eye. Make sure you check your punctuation before you publish
Mrs M
Wow Hidit this is an amazing 100WC. I love how you wrote this as though it was in the middle of a story. It added a real sense of drama. You built the suspense of the situation with your writing. I especially loved the ending. You used very descriptive words to describe the trees and what they would do to you and Olivia. All round, this is an excellent piece of writing.
Mrs P (Team 100WC)
Wellington, New Zealand
Hi Hidit,
Another wonderful response to the prompt this week. You have made really great use of language to draw me in and paint a picture in my mind’s eye. Make sure you check your punctuation before you publish
Mrs M