Hi Rayyan,
This was an original response to this week’s prompt. You have strong authorial voice and have developed a clear style that is enjoyable to read and pulls you in. My only advice would be think about when to use is/are and when to change paragraphs.
Hi Rayyan,
This was an original response to this week’s prompt. You have strong authorial voice and have developed a clear style that is enjoyable to read and pulls you in. My only advice would be think about when to use is/are and when to change paragraphs.
Keep on writing.
Mrs M