Hi Pasupathi,
This was a fabulous way to respond to the prompt. I loved the way you created an atmosphere that made you feel you were heading towards the end and then you included your twist and all was well. My only tip would be to make sure you check your tenses before you publish as you jump between past and present which can be a little confusing.
Hi Pasupathi,
This was a fabulous way to respond to the prompt. I loved the way you created an atmosphere that made you feel you were heading towards the end and then you included your twist and all was well. My only tip would be to make sure you check your tenses before you publish as you jump between past and present which can be a little confusing.
Keep on writing.
Mrs Moore