wow really liked your story and how you said all of a sudden
remember to use commas ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,!! also use some different punctuation!!!!! from imaan
This is an interesting and colourful story, Somran. You have used all the set words and lots of punctuation marks. It is very descriptive and the girl seems really disappointed with her present. I hope that you keep writing for 100 WC. Well done.
Hello Heather Thank you for writing on my work! Hope you liked it Somran
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wow really liked your story and how you said all of a sudden
remember to use commas
,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,!!
also use some different punctuation!!!!!
from imaan
This is an interesting and colourful story, Somran.
You have used all the set words and lots of punctuation marks.
It is very descriptive and the girl seems really disappointed with her present.
I hope that you keep writing for 100 WC. Well done.
Hello Heather
Thank you for writing on my work!
Hope you liked it
Somran