Wow! Talk about a surprise ending. I really thought it was going to turn out quite differently. But am happy that I was wrong. Does Tom’s new friend have a name too? I am curious though where the docks were, and even what was the ship called. All of these little things can help your reader imagine the story you are telling. Keep up the good work though, and I hope Tom and his new friend have many amazing adventures.
Wow! Talk about a surprise ending. I really thought it was going to turn out quite differently. But am happy that I was wrong. Does Tom’s new friend have a name too? I am curious though where the docks were, and even what was the ship called. All of these little things can help your reader imagine the story you are telling. Keep up the good work though, and I hope Tom and his new friend have many amazing adventures.