Hello Anojan, I like the comparison of the beginning of your story in the nice warm bed with that of the coldness of Antarctica. You are able to create interest in your story by making it seem like everything is going fine and then all of a sudden things were no longer safe. It’s a good thing polar bears are strong and in this case. Well done.
Great to see the polar bear coming to your rescue, goes to show appearances can be deceptive!
You might want to check your punctuation.
Keep it up.
Kia ora Anojan. Well done, I really enjoyed your 100 Word Challenge. Your description is strong, e.g. ice cold snow, dark night – you’ve ‘painted’ a picture so that the reader can imagine everything taking place. Keep up the super writing Anojan.
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