After all that concern about his tyre, I was beginning to wonder how James would solve his conundrum. I certainly didn’t expect the polar bear to support him. A great interpretation of the prompt!
Thanks for sharing,
Jackie (Team 100WC)
What a fabulous twist to your tale; I loved the idea of the polar bear being your saviour- appearances can be deceptive.
Keep on writing, you’re developing a great writer’s voice Brindan
Wow… what a great story and a wonderful name for your protagonist (the lead character). I love that what seemed to be a scary story turned out to be a fun one with the bear being the hero. One thing I might suggest for consideration, for such a short story you used the word tyre a fair bit, maybe you could call it something else also, even just it sometimes. I hope James has many more adventure, maybe even with a helpful polar bear.
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