The car

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2 Responses to The car

  1. Mrs P (Team 100WC) says:

    What a fabulous 100WC Oliver. The way you have written it really gives an idea of how boring the author found the situation. The cliffhanger at the end leaves the reader wondering what will happen. Well done.
    Mrs P (Team 100WC)
    Wellington, New Zealand

  2. nanand says:

    Hi Oliver,

    This was a gripping read, I love how you created a bad situation and then made it even worse. I only hope you find your way out of it.

    Keep up the great writing.

    Mrs M

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