Hi Spandana,
You did a great job of building tension throughout your tale. You have made good use of the narrator’s voice. Watch your tenses.
Mrs M
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Hi Spandana,
You did a great job of building tension throughout your tale. You have made good use of the narrator’s voice. Watch your tenses.
Mrs M