Hi Andrei, You did a great job of altering the text to create your own version and you explained feelings. Remember to use precise detail of what you can see to paint a picture in your reader’s mnd.
Mrs M
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Hi Andrei,
You did a great job of altering the text to create your own version and you explained feelings. Remember to use precise detail of what you can see to paint a picture in your reader’s mnd.
Mrs M