Well done Yukta , you’ve done a fabulous job of altering the text to create your own version; I loved the way you used the Titanic as your ship. Remember using precise details, like the type of fish, paints a much clearer picture for your reader.
Mrs M
Well done Yukta , you’ve done a fabulous job of altering the text to create your own version; I loved the way you used the Titanic as your ship. Remember using precise details, like the type of fish, paints a much clearer picture for your reader.
Mrs M