Hi Oliver
Well if you will go wandering around in the woods at midnight! A well put together and story with a good sense of the eerie that to be expected in a good creepy story. Be careful when you are out though monsters lurk in the daytime as well! Good work, well done.
What an exciting and tense story, Oliver. I really like the way you set the story up and build the tension, especially when you say ‘I’ll try to talk about it.’ That makes it seem so worrying! I particularly like the phrase ‘a sight so terrifying I nearly died from fright’. Then you leave us in suspense in the end! Clearly you got away, but what else did you see?
Hi Oliver
Well if you will go wandering around in the woods at midnight! A well put together and story with a good sense of the eerie that to be expected in a good creepy story. Be careful when you are out though monsters lurk in the daytime as well! Good work, well done.
What an exciting and tense story, Oliver. I really like the way you set the story up and build the tension, especially when you say ‘I’ll try to talk about it.’ That makes it seem so worrying! I particularly like the phrase ‘a sight so terrifying I nearly died from fright’. Then you leave us in suspense in the end! Clearly you got away, but what else did you see?